A while ago, my friend Phil asked me if I could do a spoken version of ‘Black Rose’. I finally found the time to do so! 🙂
To listen, click here—> Black Rose
Black Rose
–
A Wilderness of such
lovely confusion
yet, you take it all in
Stars too high to touch
but
Still you reach to win
Not seeing it’s all
An illusion
This dark heart of mine tells a story of
glorious deception
and
Sin
I break everything to get where I
belong
Still I play innocent in this lullaby
song
and I give nothing but
Riddles
to those who come close
I’m like a poisonous black Rose
Sting
The ones that touch my heart
I’ll stop the bleeding with another kiss
Although a scar will remain
And the poison gets under your skin
You believe my lies
And
I drive you insane
–
Just Patty
Reblogged this on theowlladyblog.
Thank you so much for reblogging.
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Wow! You have such an amazing voice! Your poem really comes to life when you read it… excellent!
Thank you Ali! 🙂
I am glad that you like it.
Lots of love,
Patty
That was fantastic, Patty!
Thank you so much Richard! 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog….. An Author Promotions Enterprise! and commented:
POETRY LOVERS – Listen to this and find more of Patty reading her own poems at: https://soundcloud.com/just-patty-van-delft
😀
Thank you for reblogging my friend! 🙂
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VERY Welcome Patty – I just couldn’t keep this all to myself 😀 😀 😀
How can anything so beautiful, be so dark! I loved it.
Thank you! 🙂
Darkness can contain a lot of beauty, as long as we can keep it out of our hearts 😉
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I love this Patty! I’m a fan of black roses and I love yours! ️Hugs and much love to you!
Thank you my sweet friend! 🙂
I love black roses too.
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Patty, I’m honored & humbled that you recorded “Black Rose”…..LOVE THE SPOKEN POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! You REALLY pulled this off! And so well!!! You ARE an actor! I could not figure out how you would deliver this harsh message & have to have a mean voice or tone. But the actor in you played the devil hidden in a life-like believable character like in a movie. And you pull your victim in & over power him as the Black Rose. –Marvelously spoken by you! And written too!!! Thanks, Patty! Phil
Thank you my friend! 🙂
I had to play with it a little before I could record it the way I wanted, but I am glad that I could pull it off!
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YOU young Lady MUST do MORE audio recordings like this…
PS even an old ape like me thinks you have a delicious voice 😀
Hahaha, thank you Chris! 🙂
You can find my recordings here: https://soundcloud.com/just-patty-van-delft
I will try to do more!
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WOW – That’s a LOT of poetry Patty 😀
Hahaha, yes! 🙂
I had to get used to it for a moment but now I kinda like to recital my poems!
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GOOD – you’ve got a great voice for poetry Patty 😀
I loved it immensely and left you a comment on the Soundcloud site, so I hope you got it. It was beautiful Patty, your voice is quite hypnotic.
Thank you so much! 🙂
I can’t find the comment, but I am still figuring out how that site works lol!
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Very beautiful Patty 😉
Thank you Irene! 🙂
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Beautiful…! I do hope for more? 🙂
Thank you Andy! 🙂
Hahaha, I have a couple of spoken poems on SoundCloud, but I’m sure there will be more!
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Ohhh now I’m heading over that way! 😀 Hugz! ❤
Reblogged this on It Is What It Is and commented:
The power of the spoken word …. Black Rose!!
Thanks for reblogging sis! 🙂
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Black Rose is really a pure love
Well… it’s pure evil that’s for sure lol 😉
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lovey recital!
Thanks Heart! 🙂
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You have a beautiful voice, thank you for sharing it with us!
Well, thank you! 🙂
I really hate my voice actually, but I think a lot of people do because we sound so different in our own heads lol!
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