Hurt me…
–
Bruise me
With your words
Hurtful
I take it silently
Anyway…
Because it is you
–
Fracture me
With your lies
Brutal
It makes me angry
Everyday…
But I can’t let you go
–
Break me
With your indifference
Painful
I feel so lonely
Crossway…
What will I do?
–
Destroy me
With your silence
Battle
But I can’t break free
Someday…
I will be able to let you go
–
Just Patty
Sometimes words just make your head snap back and you think, yeah, got it. Thanks for the snap Patty.
So true Donna.
Every once in a while we could all use a reminder.
Lots of love ♥
Wow, you words bare such raw emotions pulling the readers right in with you! I liked how you ended it with enough hope to move on from that darkness 🙂 Great write as usual!
Thank you Neha! 🙂
Lots of love ❤
You’re welcome! 🙂 Lots of love back 🙂
Wow… If these are from your heart then I feel your pain..
I always write from the heart my friend. There’s no other way for me to write.
Lots of love ❤
Hope you are doing good, Patty. I’ve been on and off the road of blogging lately. 🙂
I am doing good my friend. 🙂
Hope you are doing well too.
Lots of love and Hugz ❤
You’re really onto something here Patty. Really liked this one. Hope you’re well. Lots of love and Hugs xo
Thanks Tan! 🙂
I just sent you a email.
Hugz & Lots of love ❤
Cool. Lots of love and hugz ❤
Love those hopeful last lines. It’s always painful to detach from someone bad for you, but the hurt passes. *hugs*
Thank you my friend.
Some day…
Hugz ♥
Patty, Autobiographical for you or you writing for others, as you taught me long ago. But if the latter, you could be an actor/actress with these poetic lines, they are so good. Phil
This is all me Phil. As you know, I have a hard time letting people go. For some reason, people don’t rent a place in my heart, they just get it for life. Rent free.
Lots of love ♥
i could say that to my Ex Angel ! ..wow ….. Q
Hugz ♥
Been there. Done that. Glad to be free! You capture the captivity and hurt very well. In the end, it’s just not worth it. Hugs.
Thank you J.
Lots of love ♥
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I love the power of the written word! Awesome ….. feelings so palpable!!
I could feel that one Patty… ❤ x
Me too pal.
♥ X
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😦 unfortunately this is the way too many try to find or deal with their thought of love. I always hope they find that special someone that will cherish their time and life.
True words Gray.
Lots of love ♥
Hugs my dear. Always enjoy wires that make me think.