17 comments on “Poetrics for today: Lullaby

  1. Patty, Nickelback’s “Lullaby” is quite a strong song for the lyric….but I was influenced by your poetrics filling in their lines! And your poem really takes off from the song’s lyrics & runs with it, develops it so well! You captured the spirit of their song which is really upbeat I think for the message. Great job on this poetrics! You are breaking out & leading!!! Phil

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