A poem from My Whisperings: Stop Loving You…

Posted by Just Patty on June 20, 2015

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Stop loving you

–

Trying so hard

To forget you

Stop loving you

But all I do

Is fall apart

Trying my best

To hate you

Stop loving you

So I can finally

Get some rest

Trying wholeheartedly

To erase you

Stop loving you

Escape your spell

And just be me

Trying everything

To leave you

Stop loving you

But I collapse

My heart is breaking

Trying to ignore

My feelings for you

Stop loving you

But running away

Only makes me love you more…

–

Just Patty

From: My Whisperings

9 comments on “A poem from My Whisperings: Stop Loving You…”

Christina Laabs on June 21, 2015 at 6:24 pm said:

I really like that. I write poetry too. But I haven’t done anything with it yet.

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- Just Patty on June 22, 2015 at 3:23 pm said:
  
  Thank you Christina.
  Maybe you should, it’s nice to make a collection of your poems.
  Lots of Love,
  Patty
  
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charliezero1.wordpress.com on June 21, 2015 at 7:59 am said:

OH!!! WOW!!! Breath-taking! Driven! & Powerful!

I love this very much in deed.

Thank you for you always being you. 🙂

P.S Yesterday, Friday – I posted a poem about my PTSD and showing awareness of this month.

I really hope you love it…I hope I did my best to interpret my feelings for the 2nd time.

It’s titled: Melancholy Repeats the Dark Void.

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- Just Patty on June 22, 2015 at 3:24 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much Charlie!
  Your kind words sooth my broken soul.
  I will check out your poem of course, I am very curious! 🙂
  Hugz & Love ❤
  
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macjam47 on June 21, 2015 at 2:22 am said:

Beautifully written! Hugs, my friend.

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- Just Patty on June 22, 2015 at 3:30 pm said:
  
  Thank you Michelle.
  Love & Hugz always ❤
  
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philipfontana on June 20, 2015 at 5:23 pm said:

Patty, Oh do I remember “Stop loving you” from your 2nd book. A GREAT candidate for a spoken poem!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can hear you now! Phil

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- Just Patty on June 22, 2015 at 3:30 pm said:
  
  Thank you Phil!
  I will certainly try it out.
  Hugz & Love ❤
  
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Dr. Rex on June 20, 2015 at 3:03 pm said:

Reblogged this on It Is What It Is and commented:
The power of the written word …..

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