NaPoWriMo Day 28: Losing…

Posted by Just Patty on April 28, 2015
Posted in: dark poetry, emotions, Feelings, fotobewerking, fotografie, friends, frustration, Gedichten, Life, Love, NaPoWriMo, NaPoWriMo 2015, photo editing, Photography, Poems, poetry, Writing. Tagged: , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . 6 Comments

Losing

Losing

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I’m losing

You

I can

Feel

You slipping

Through

My fingers

I can

See

You drifting

Away

From me

I can

Hear

My heart

Breaking

Into pieces

I’m losing

You

I can

Whisper

A goodbye

With

Tears in

My eyes

But

I don’t know

How

I can

Keep you

Close

To me…

–

Just Patty

 

 

 

 

6 comments on “NaPoWriMo Day 28: Losing…”

  2. Patty, Really nice! Like the way you wrote this like short sentences broken up into lines of 1-2 words……Very affective once again! And content of “losing” very powerful with the reader wanting to pull for you, help you not to lose your love. Day 28!!!!!!!!!!!! Close!!!!!!!!!! You are almost there! Phil

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