6 comments on “NaPoWriMo Day 28: Losing…

  1. Patty, Really nice! Like the way you wrote this like short sentences broken up into lines of 1-2 words……Very affective once again! And content of “losing” very powerful with the reader wanting to pull for you, help you not to lose your love. Day 28!!!!!!!!!!!! Close!!!!!!!!!! You are almost there! Phil

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