Losing
I’m losing
You
I can
Feel
You slipping
Through
My fingers
I can
See
You drifting
Away
From me
I can
Hear
My heart
Breaking
Into pieces
I’m losing
You
I can
Whisper
A goodbye
With
Tears in
My eyes
But
I don’t know
How
I can
Keep you
Close
To me…
–
Just Patty
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GOOD STUFF AND EVOCATIVE PICTURE, PATTY!
Thank you very much Jonathan! 🙂
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Patty, Really nice! Like the way you wrote this like short sentences broken up into lines of 1-2 words……Very affective once again! And content of “losing” very powerful with the reader wanting to pull for you, help you not to lose your love. Day 28!!!!!!!!!!!! Close!!!!!!!!!! You are almost there! Phil
Thank you Phil.
My biggest fear put into words.
Yes, almost there!
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So sad, but beautiful just the same. I like the form your poem has taken. Hugs
Thank you Michelle.
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