NaPoWriMo Day 8: Finally Broken

Posted by Just Patty on April 8, 2015

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Finally Broken

Insanity

Crawling under my skin

The beehive in my mind

Slowly drives me crazy

Numbness

Fastly covering my soul

There’s no relief to find

The agony is endless

Crying

But there are no tears

I’m deaf and blind

My heart beats, but I’m dying

Beaten

It chills me to the bone

Frozen emotions, so unkind

Maybe I’m finally broken…

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Just Patty

14 comments on “NaPoWriMo Day 8: Finally Broken”

Christy Birmingham on April 10, 2015 at 5:57 pm said:

Beautiful!!

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- Just Patty on April 13, 2015 at 11:24 am said:
  
  Thank you Christy!
  Hugz & Love ❤
  
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irenedesign2011 on April 9, 2015 at 3:27 pm said:

Beautiful written Patty – send you healing thoughts 🙂

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- Just Patty on April 10, 2015 at 11:53 am said:
  
  Thank you so much my dear friend.
  Hugz & Love ❤
  
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philipfontana on April 8, 2015 at 5:46 pm said:

Patty, Day 8’s “Finally Broken”….I can identify with these days…..trying to do too much & feels like all is crashing down upon me. You said it well. Photo just right yet peaceful too!

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- Just Patty on April 9, 2015 at 11:36 am said:
  
  Thank you my friend.
  Take it easy! You can’t do everything at once.
  Hugz & Love ❤
  
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Lisa Mari on April 8, 2015 at 5:34 pm said:

Reblogged this on Myblog's Blog.

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- Just Patty on April 9, 2015 at 11:29 am said:
  
  Thank you for the reblog my sweet friend!
  Love & Hugz ❤
  
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  - Lisa Mari on April 9, 2015 at 12:20 pm said:
    
    Min glede vakre ❤️🌹
  - Lisa Mari on April 9, 2015 at 12:20 pm said:
    
    Håper alt er bra med deg😊Ønsker deg alt godt❤️Love Lisa🌹
Dr. Rex on April 8, 2015 at 4:23 pm said:

Reblogged this on It Is What It Is and commented:
The power of the written word ….. sending healing!!

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- Just Patty on April 9, 2015 at 11:36 am said:
  
  Thank you sis.
  Love you! ❤
  
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callummclaughlin on April 8, 2015 at 3:21 pm said:

‘The beehive in my mind’ – That’s a wonderful bit of imagery 🙂

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- Just Patty on April 9, 2015 at 11:37 am said:
  
  Thanks Callum! 🙂
  It really is a beehive sometimes lol.
  Hugz & Love ❤
  
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