Try One More Time
–
You say that you
have given up
On Life
On Love
You don’t
Believe
Things will get better
Not Now
Not Ever
Just staying in the
Dark
Forever
You’ve been hurt
Too much
Have lost
Too much
And now you are
Done
I say
Don’t ever give up
On Life
On Love
I believe
In you
Things will get better
I see
The Pain
I feel
The hopelessness
But
If you stay in the
Light
Just fight
I can see it in your
Eyes
That Spark…
You are not yet
Defeated
You are not yet
Done
Just try
One more time…
–
Just Patty
Beautiful words of encouragement.
Thank you so much!
Lots of Love,
Patty
Reblogged this on withoutyoutherewouldbenome and commented:
My exact thoughts… One more try all the time no matter how hard
Thank you so much for reblogging.
Lots of Love,
Patty
Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Beautiful photo and amazing words of wisdom. Please read and enjoy the outstanding poetry.
Thank you so much for reblogging!
Lots of Love ❤
I agree. Always chance and opportunity for love and life. Thank you for the beautiful photo and positive words.
Thank you!
Yes, fall down 7 times, stand up 8!
Hugz & Love ❤
I agree.
Loved every word of it. Thank you so much for sharing.
Thank you my friend. 🙂
Hugz & Love ❤
Absolutely love this, a million times. This speaks to my sole. Thank you for more excellent writing. <3<3<3
Thank you so much! 🙂
Love & Hugz ❤
Meaningful words, thoughts expressed perfectly, and a great photo too! What more can we ask for?
Hope you are well Patty. Always great to ‘see’ you.
Best wishes from Beetley. Pete. x
Thank you so much Pete. 🙂
Hope you are well too my friend.
Hugz & Love ❤
It can be hard to start again Patty but words like these can give courage when it is missing. Nice work.
Thank you Mike.
Yes, everyone has that breaking point where they feel that they can’t go on any longer.
It’s okay to break down, as long as you stand up again.
Love & Hugz ❤
So hopeful and so beautifully written. Hugs. 🙂
Thank you Michelle!
I hope that it will give others some strength.
Hugz & Love ❤
Wow Patty, really beautiful poem 😀
I needed this one today.
Thank you Irene!
I am glad that it can give you some strength.
Hugz & Love ❤
Patty, Ah, I see what you mean….both Darkness & Light can coexist & compliment one-another!!! So good, short lines, big message! Phil
Thank you my dear friend.
Yes, there will always be a ray of light to find in the darkness.
Hugz & Love ❤
Love this. Thanks for the positive words. ❤
Thank you!
Hugz & Love ❤
What a fine photo 🙂
Thanks Bill! 🙂
Lots of Love ❤
Reblogged this on sueshan123blog.
Thank you for reblogging! 🙂
Lots of Love
Patty
Powerful and inspiring. Hope you’re having a nice weekend.
Thank you Alex! 🙂
Have a wonderful weekend yourself!
Hugz & Love ❤
Reblogged this on It Is What It Is and commented:
Power of the written word … Try one more time!