MY WHISPERINGS By Just Patty (Patty van Delft)

My first review for My Whisperings! 🙂
Thank you Michelle ❤

This is the second book of poetry written by Just Patty. Patty delves into deepest emotions in her poetry. MY WHISPERINGS is a collection of dark poetry, though some of her poems have a more positive note.

One that struck me as being particularly dark and deeply painful is “PTSD”. The last verse is a good example of the entire poem.

Silently drowning

In a sea of unshed tears I shout

I am chocking

I’m hurting!

Just want to end it

But… I can’t find a way out

“Vengeance” is another of her poems that is very dark as illustrated by the following verse from it. In this poem Just Patty explores revenge.

Ruthless

Ice cold justice got served

In my heart, there’s no compassion

You got what you deserved!

One of my favorites of her poems is “The Warrior” which is more uplifting as Just Patty portrays steadfastness and…

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12 comments on “MY WHISPERINGS By Just Patty (Patty van Delft)”

Yay Patty this is so wonderful! I love your new cover art! Bravo and yay for you! I think you are amazing and brave to share so candidly! It is beautiful just like you! 😄💗

Just Patty on December 3, 2014 at 11:46 am said:

Thank you so much Michelle! 🙂
Hugz & Love to you my friend ❤

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Patty, I am thrilled you liked the review. As you know, I was worried about how I would do it, since a book of poetry is so different than a novel, which is what I usually review. Thank you for reblogging. Hugs ❤

Just Patty on December 2, 2014 at 10:33 pm said:

I think that you did a great job! 🙂
Very different from other reviews, I like it a lot.
Hugz & Love ❤

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- macjam47 on December 3, 2014 at 3:14 am said:
  
  You made my day. Thanks.

Great job

Patty, I LOVE your work and I am just so proud of you! We may have inner scars, yet we are strong and can and do overcome just about ALL that represents US. Bless you, Patty! (((HUGS))) Amy

Just Patty on December 2, 2014 at 10:28 am said:

Thank you Amy!
Yes, we can wear our scars with pride my friend. We fought and survived!
Lots of love and Hugz ❤

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- LadyPinkRose on December 2, 2014 at 5:04 pm said:
  
  And still surviving! (smile) I Love you, Patty!!!! (((HUGS))) Amy
- Just Patty on December 2, 2014 at 10:29 pm said:
  
  Love you 2 Amy!
  Hugz ❤

Patty, Michelle did a great job!!! Read it all! I like the way she uses your verse for several poems. Plus she “covered you” re real name, website, FB, “My Wings, ” etc. Very thorough but for you novels. Phil

Just Patty on December 1, 2014 at 6:06 pm said:

Yes she did a great job Phil! 🙂
And I am so glad that she likes my poetry!
Hugz & Love ❤

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MichelleMarie on December 3, 2014 at 5:37 am said:

Yay Patty this is so wonderful! I love your new cover art! Bravo and yay for you! I think you are amazing and brave to share so candidly! It is beautiful just like you! 😄💗

- Just Patty on December 3, 2014 at 11:46 am said:
  
  Thank you so much Michelle! 🙂
  Hugz & Love to you my friend ❤
  
macjam47 on December 2, 2014 at 3:41 pm said:

Patty, I am thrilled you liked the review. As you know, I was worried about how I would do it, since a book of poetry is so different than a novel, which is what I usually review. Thank you for reblogging. Hugs ❤

- Just Patty on December 2, 2014 at 10:33 pm said:
  
  I think that you did a great job! 🙂
  Very different from other reviews, I like it a lot.
  Hugz & Love ❤
  
  - macjam47 on December 3, 2014 at 3:14 am said:
    
    You made my day. Thanks.
Bernieshoot on December 2, 2014 at 6:56 am said:

Great job

LadyPinkRose on December 1, 2014 at 7:02 pm said:

Patty, I LOVE your work and I am just so proud of you! We may have inner scars, yet we are strong and can and do overcome just about ALL that represents US. Bless you, Patty! (((HUGS))) Amy

- Just Patty on December 2, 2014 at 10:28 am said:
  
  Thank you Amy!
  Yes, we can wear our scars with pride my friend. We fought and survived!
  Lots of love and Hugz ❤
  
  - LadyPinkRose on December 2, 2014 at 5:04 pm said:
    
    And still surviving! (smile) I Love you, Patty!!!! (((HUGS))) Amy
  - Just Patty on December 2, 2014 at 10:29 pm said:
    
    Love you 2 Amy!
    Hugz ❤
philipfontana on December 1, 2014 at 6:00 pm said:

Patty, Michelle did a great job!!! Read it all! I like the way she uses your verse for several poems. Plus she “covered you” re real name, website, FB, “My Wings, ” etc. Very thorough but for you novels. Phil

- Just Patty on December 1, 2014 at 6:06 pm said:
  
  Yes she did a great job Phil! 🙂
  And I am so glad that she likes my poetry!
  Hugz & Love ❤