8 comments on “Duet with John: Desperate Redemption

  1. Love the photo and poem. The last stanza made me cheer, because I’ve felt defeated lately and thought about giving up. I love the resolve to fight on:

    Suddenly turning my life upside down

    I draw my sword and clench my teeth

    Prepared to fight to the death with courage renewed.

    Stealing victory from the jaws of defeat!

  2. Patty, You & John have spun a true “Desperate Redemption” with both of you skillfully fighting off defeat with your powerful words! Here I hear you & John alternating verses starting & ending with you! My guess! Excellently done as always! Phil

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