28 comments on “Spoken Dark poetry: Visit from Death

  1. Oh My God Patty. What a terrifyingly stunning work of dark art you have here. From the PERFECT image manipulation, to the gripping poem, to the spoken word narrative. There are really no words to describe how impressive I think this is. I just hope that DEATH does not ever taunt you so in anything other than a fictional sense. Be well my dear friend and keep inspiring.

    • Thank you so much John! 🙂
      Your compliments make me blush and smile my friend.
      Although Death have tempted me many times, I always managed to escape. Life holds too much beauty to give in so easily!
      Have a wonderful, relaxing weekend!
      Hugz & Love ❤

      • I didn’t like my voice much until I became a Mute, now it would be a blessing to hear those out of tune notes coming out again.
        Like beauty, eye”ears” of the beholder
        Happy Monday, another day above the ground))))))))

      • I didn’t knew that you were a mute my friend. I am sorry about that.
        And you are absolutely right. All kinds of beauty are in the eye of the beholder.
        Hugz & Love ❤

  2. Patty, Every time I think you have outdone yourself with a spoken poem you outdo yourself again! “Visit from Death” could not be Darker nor more dramatic with you giving special voice to Death speaking to you. You have made me a fan of your Dark Poetry!!! I’m won over to your side!!! Phil

  3. Spooky in beautiful words! It makes me think about the people who draw you close with a smile and turn out to be fake, maybe evil to some. It makes me think: What is hell? Saying Farewell or Life?
    Am not sure if death always comes with devil? In life we meet devils and Angels. Who will stay with us till the End?

    • Great questions! I wonder about those things myself as well.
      I think that ‘the devil’ can come to us in many different sizes and shapes and so do ‘angels’.
      Lots of love ❤

  4. Wow what an ending Patty. I’m happy to think that the death of one part of our life can be the beginning of a new life. Today is the first day in the rest of our life 🙂

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