The weeping willow
–
Sitting peacefully
Underneath the weeping willow
Keeping all my thoughts of you
Deep inside of me
Cherishing, protecting
My last thoughts of you
–
Hiding anxiously
Underneath the weeping willow
Holding all my love for you
Deep inside of me
Bleeding, crying
My lost love for you
–
Kneeling cravenly
Underneath the weeping willow
Keeping all my dreams of you
Deep inside of me
Dreaming, sleeping
My days without you
Lying blissfully
Underneath the weeping willow
Holding all my memories of you
Deep inside of me
Remembering, missing
All of you
–
Closing my eyes
Underneath the weeping willow
I feel death
Deep inside of me
Stop breathing, living
Without you…
–
– Just Patty –
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Beautiful photo and amazing poetry. Thank you.
Thank you so much John.
Lots of love ❤
💛så fint bilde og kjempe fin tekst💛
Takk så mye!
Mye kjærlighet ❤
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Another great poem by Just Patty 🙂
Thank you Martin! 🙂
Hugz & Love ❤
Ah, Patty, I once had a willow tree also. My dreaming, however, was done on the front porch swing. The willow tree was my little home, where I had tea parties.
Angie
The weeping willow is my absolute favorite tree.
I think it’s so beautiful and calming to sit beneath it.
Lots of love ❤
Great photo and beautiful poem Patty, very well done 😀
Thank you so much Irene! 🙂
Hugz & Love ❤
Patty, hoping all is well with you. I haven’t heard from you in so long and so I write this, knowing how difficult the month of April was for you. Beautiful poetry and I love the way you portrayed yourself in this photo. Love, Amy
I am doing good Amy. I hope you are well too!
Just been very busy with rewriting my second fantasy book. 🙂
Sending lots of love and hugz ❤
I carry you in my HEART, Patty, so that you find the strength and the endurance and the imagination to write another phenomenal book. I left you a 5 star review on amazon. I hope you like it. (((HUGS))) Amy
Thank you so much Amy.
You are in my heart as well my sweet friend.
Lots and lots of love ❤
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Mooie woorden die touch en achtervolgen van de ziel terwijl het bereiken van voor het hart. Uitstekend, Patty
Grote knuffels voor u.)))))))))))))))
Dankjewel mijn vriend! 🙂
Knuffels en liefs ❤
❤ ❤ <D ))))))))))))))))))))))
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Touching, hauntingly
excellent serenity for the soul
Thank you so much hon.
Hugz & Love ❤
This is so bittersweetly beautiful. I can certainly relate to the feelings you are projecting.
Thank you so much my friend.
I am sorry that you can relate.
Sending you lots of love and hugz ❤
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Awesome!! The power of the written word!!
Patty, “The Weeping Willow” captures a mesmerizing technique in writing & speeches, that of repetition. Here your repetition of “underneath the weeping willow” is hypnotic to the reader, captivating the reader in mind & emotion. You have the reader in the palm of your hand, as the expression goes. Phil
Thank you so much Phil!
Lots of love & Hugz ❤