Lucky me! I got the chance to write another duet with one f my favorite writers: Alex Kennedy! 🙂
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Love a bit of dark writing? Then you have to check out Alex’s blog!
He is an amazing writer and an awesome person.
When this guy publishes his book, I definitely want to have it!
No wait, I definitely NEED to have it! 🙂
Anyway, enjoy our duet and don’t forget to say ‘Hi’ to Alex.
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Alex–>http://youngadultfictionblog.com
Just Patty –>https://petitemagique.wordpress.com/
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‘The Fallen Ones’
By
Alex & Patty
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Tumbling
Inside my own mind
A free fall without a parachute
The darkness surrounds me
I close my eyes and drift away
Don’t try to safe me
Just let me be
Drifting
Without a destination
Lock me away
Put me in chains
Before I drag you down with me
Can’t escape the things that aren’t there
Or are they?
Hiding
Inside my mind
The seasons change
But I stand still
Captured inside a glass box
I can see, but never touch
I am done fighting, I am done running
Tripping
Over obstacles on my path
Of life
Of death
Does it matter?
No
Because nothing really matters anymore
When you’re falling into the depths of
Insanity
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If you somersault within a plummet,
I will catch you,
I’m a rip-cord wonder,
I’ll be your personal parachute.
I’m your spotlight in the dark,
We must both fight for our hearts,
Sailing upon this boat,
Because we’re oceans apart,
I’m coming closer from afar.
When the destinations unknown,
Set sail for the road that leads home,
And for your metal chains there must be a keyhole,
So when your days let it rain,
And your faith gets away,
Keep hope close,
I’m pulling you out from this deep hole,
So you no longer feel cold,
We’re just two people,
Good and evil,
It’s time to evolve,
And see it all.
Come back to the land of the living,
Where I am,
I’m a helping hand worth giving,
Stick yours out,
Come with me, please.
Sanity or insanity?
So glad to see another duet from you two!!! Well done, both!
Thank you Laura!
Hahaha, yes I managed to talk him into another one 😉
Hugz & Love ❤
Lovely piece. I particularly love the hopeful ending. A ‘hand worth giving’ – lovely.
Thank you Kim! 🙂
Love & Hugz ❤
Patty & Alex, “The Fallen Ones”…….You’ve both done it again! Fighting, falling, & then saving the other no matter what! Ah, but this time Patty plays the heavy, the darkest first part, & Alex plays the savior coming to the rescue in the second part! You have different styles & different vocabularies, but blend them beautifully together! Very fine! Phil
Thank you so much Phil! 🙂
Hahaha, yes you are right once again!
Alex does a great job saving!
Lots of love and hugz ❤
Your poetry skills are sublime!
Thank you so much Russel.
Lots of love & Hugz ❤
“No longer cold feet, just two people” I love your writing.
Thank you!
Hugz ♥
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