NaPoWriMo day 3: Poetry: The Angel of Death

Posted by Just Patty on April 3, 2014

Posted in: dark poetry, fotobewerking, fotografie, Gedichten, NaPoWriMo, NaPoWriMo 2014, photo editing, Photography, Poems, poetry, Writing. Tagged: dark poetry, emotions, fotobewerking, fotografie, NaPoWriMo, NaPoWriMo 2014, photo editing, photography, poem, poems, poetry, writing. 23 Comments

The Angel of Death

She stands before you with a soothing smile

Sings a final lullaby

Makes your heart beat one last time

Before you can whisper a goodbye

She wears black, is dressed to kill

Softly caresses your skin

Puts you to sleep for eternity

Beauty outside, but evil within

She comes to you at your final hour

Eyes filled with promises

Stops the pain with a single touch

Beyond life, she relieves the stress

She takes lives with an undeniable grace

Kisses away your final breath

Makes your sorrow disappear

Behold, for she is the Angel of Death

– Just Patty –

23 comments on “NaPoWriMo day 3: Poetry: The Angel of Death”

Mike on April 5, 2014 at 1:06 pm said:

‘dressed to kill’ indeed Patty! A dark cautionary tale well told. Much enjoyed thank you.

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- Just Patty on April 5, 2014 at 7:33 pm said:
  
  Thank you Mike! 🙂
  Hugz & Love ❤
  
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haelanra on April 4, 2014 at 2:26 pm said:

Wow, I like the images in this darkly thought-provoking poem 🙂 I look forward to reading more of your poems!

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- Just Patty on April 4, 2014 at 6:29 pm said:
  
  Thank you very much! 🙂
  Lots of love
  Patty
  
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quarksire on April 4, 2014 at 8:01 am said:

wow..amazing piece,,,PS: reposted ur book link to my site 🙂 peace 2 U .Mikey 🙂

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- Just Patty on April 4, 2014 at 1:04 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much dear friend! ❤
  Hugz!
  
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philipfontana on April 3, 2014 at 9:35 pm said:

Patty, Day 3 of NaPoWriMo with “The Angel of Death” …..Good one again, naturally! The Angel starts out sounding like the “tooth fairy” ( Do the Dutch have one of those?). But you show her dark sided scheme as she steals you away to that place beyond life on this earth. Very well done. Phil

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- Just Patty on April 4, 2014 at 12:21 am said:
  
  Thank you Phil! 🙂
  Yes, we have the tooth fairy in Holland as well. 🙂
  Hugz & Love my dear friend! ❤
  
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Cynthia on April 3, 2014 at 9:13 pm said:

You’re so talented, we need to see a book! Thank you so much, I love poetry and it’s your forte…completely!

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- Just Patty on April 4, 2014 at 12:20 am said:
  
  Thank you so much Cynthia! 🙂
  I just published my poetry book today!
  Lots of love
  
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  - Cynthia on April 4, 2014 at 12:21 am said:
    
    Congrats to you! Where can I find it?
  - Just Patty on April 4, 2014 at 12:26 am said:
    
    Thank you! 🙂
    On the top menu on my blog you will find a tab that says ‘poetry book: my wings’. You can find the information about the book and the link to the internet store right there. 🙂
    Hugz & Love
  - Cynthia on April 4, 2014 at 12:32 am said:
    
    Thanks Patty, I will check it out, I would want it autographed though if you’ll allow it. We can talk about it after I get it! 🙂
  - Just Patty on April 4, 2014 at 12:34 am said:
    
    Sure! 🙂
    have to warn you though, my handwriting is horrible! 🙂
    Love & Hugz
irenedesign2011 on April 3, 2014 at 7:37 pm said:

Wow Patty, this one is very strong and I can follow you through. Very beautiful…

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- Just Patty on April 4, 2014 at 12:19 am said:
  
  Thank you Irene! 🙂
  Hugz & Love ❤
  
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Morgan on April 3, 2014 at 7:23 pm said:

Powerful Verse, Patty 🙂 Just Lovely!

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- Just Patty on April 4, 2014 at 12:18 am said:
  
  Thank you my dear friend! 🙂
  Lots of love and hugz ❤
  
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astraltravler on April 3, 2014 at 7:07 pm said:

Dear Patty,
This is an Awesome installment. I Loved it, thank you for sharing.
Anastasia

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- Just Patty on April 4, 2014 at 12:18 am said:
  
  Thank you so much Anastasia! 🙂
  Hugz & Love
  
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  - astraltravler on April 4, 2014 at 12:19 am said:
    
    My Pleasure 😊
Jeremy Farmer on April 3, 2014 at 6:47 pm said:

Nice to see this angel shown as female which always has rung true with me. A dark, delicious write dear poet

Love and light
Jez

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- Just Patty on April 3, 2014 at 6:50 pm said:
  
  Thank you Jeremy! 🙂
  Tons of Love ❤
  
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