16 comments on “Update and a Poetrics

  1. A hard subject to tackle, but you did an amazing job! You really got the pain across that happens with abuse. I like how you combined the two 🙂

  2. I don’t recall telling you this, but I really do love your poetrics! Aside from that, I think your writing style is wonderfully unique. Just wanted to say that 🙂
    And of course, congrats for the awards, always well deserved! 🙂

  3. Great poem. Not really a big part of the poem, but the bright red and white make an effect where the red lines appear to physically pop out of the poem. An illusionary 3-D effect, I guess.

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