Dark Poetry: Shattered Trust

Posted by Just Patty on June 17, 2013

Posted in: dark poetry, emotions, fotobewerking, fotografie, friends, Love, photo editing, Photography, Poems, poetry. Tagged: black and white photography, dark poetry, emotions, fantasy, fotobewerking, fotografie, friends, Love, Nikon, photo editing, photography, poem, poetry. 31 Comments

*Warning* Dark Poetry!

About betrayal, broken promises, unreal friends. In the past, the present and the future…

31 comments on “Dark Poetry: Shattered Trust”

Eimaqwertyuiop on August 26, 2018 at 4:50 pm said:

I want to make yr poem to hardcore song…. its very niceeeeeeee, can i?

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- Just Patty on August 27, 2018 at 9:35 pm said:
  
  As long as you give me credit and send me the link to the song when it’s done, you have permission! 🙂
  
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Daniel Budiarto on June 18, 2013 at 11:40 pm said:

Ik wou “donker” zeggen maar om de een of andere reden klinkt het niet zo “diep” als het Engelse woord “dark.” If you know what I mean. This is good, I could feel the torrent of emotions from this poem. 🙂

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 11:54 pm said:
  
  Dankjewel Daniel! En je hebt gelijk, Dark of Darkness lijkt op de één of andere manier een betere beschrijving dan Donker. I know what you mean!
  Lots of love to you
  
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emma1951.wordpress.com on June 18, 2013 at 4:49 am said:

Patty – this IS gripping. I guess I was just overcome in the moment because I had to leave two friends behind recently – one of them my oldest sister, lost to envy. 🙂 Emma

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 12:34 pm said:
  
  I understand Emma. This is about my best friend I had for 17 years. The one person I thought would never leave my side. But he did when I needed him the most. It’s devastating, especially when it comes to family. Hugz to you♥
  
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frontrangescribbles on June 18, 2013 at 3:58 am said:

Don’t give up on friendships. There are some good people out in this vast world they just seem hard to find

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 12:37 pm said:
  
  I will never my friend. I am way to stubborn to ever give up. But I will be guarded for a while though. Hugz♥
  
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WB on June 18, 2013 at 3:31 am said:

Very good.

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 12:39 pm said:
  
  Thank you WB! 🙂
  
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invisibleme on June 18, 2013 at 3:14 am said:

This was hard for me to read. I’m in the process of going through this very thing with a man I thought was going to be my forever. Trust is so very fragile. I am sorry that you are feeling pain over a betrayal like this! I like how you write it to get it out of your heart!

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 12:40 pm said:
  
  I understand. Thank you so much. I just have to write, I can’t help it. Lots of Love to you♥
  
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  - invisibleme on June 18, 2013 at 4:26 pm said:
    
    I am the same way. If I don’t write I feel like I am trapped inside my heart and mind!
behindthemaskofabuse on June 18, 2013 at 12:29 am said:

Sorry this has happened. 😦

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 12:30 am said:
  
  Thank you my friend. ♥
  
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Bee on June 17, 2013 at 10:25 pm said:

Trust sometimes is truely hard to find. True and beautiful words

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 10:35 pm said:
  
  Thank you Bee! ♥
  And it is
  
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emma1951.wordpress.com on June 17, 2013 at 10:17 pm said:

this hurts too much… 🙂

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 10:35 pm said:
  
  Yes, it does sometimes Emma. ♥
  Love to you
  
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  - emma1951.wordpress.com on June 18, 2013 at 2:10 am said:
    
    Yeah.. I know… but it’s just too true 🙂
  - petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 2:24 am said:
    
    It is and it can break you into pieces, I know. But I won’t give up, there must be some sweet and loyal people left! I met a few on here! 🙂
sheridegrom - From the literary and legislative trenches. on June 17, 2013 at 10:03 pm said:

Dark but beautiful.

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 10:15 pm said:
  
  Thank you Sheri. It can’t always be rainbows and sunshine. ♥
  
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Charles Yallowitz on June 17, 2013 at 9:36 pm said:

Very sad. It’s hard to find loyal friends for some reason.

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 9:42 pm said:
  
  Yes. It’s strange that everyone seems to be looking for loyalty, but no one seem to find it.
  
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WyndyDee on June 17, 2013 at 9:33 pm said:

so sad, but so true Patty…

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 9:41 pm said:
  
  Thank you my friend. Yes, it’s sad but I am still convinced that there are in fact good people on this planet. ♥
  
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  - WyndyDee on June 17, 2013 at 11:11 pm said:
    
    Yes, I’ve met several recently! Including you…
  - petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 11:21 pm said:
    
    That’s so sweet of you! Thank you! Yes, WordPress has some very special and good people around for sure my friend. ♥
D Brockmeyer ~ Edmonton, Alberta, CANADA on June 17, 2013 at 9:33 pm said:

The dark ones are my favorite 🙂 Thanks for sharing!

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 9:40 pm said:
  
  Thank you! I have a soft spot for the dark ones as well.
  
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