Dark Poetry: Shattered Trust

Posted by Just Patty on June 17, 2013

Posted in: dark poetry, emotions, fotobewerking, fotografie, friends, Love, photo editing, Photography, Poems, poetry. Tagged: black and white photography, dark poetry, emotions, fantasy, fotobewerking, fotografie, friends, Love, Nikon, photo editing, photography, poem, poetry. 33 Comments

*Warning* Dark Poetry!

About betrayal, broken promises, unreal friends. In the past, the present and the future…

33 comments on “Dark Poetry: Shattered Trust”

Prints Rhino on January 17, 2021 at 11:45 pm said:

Hello,

I have a Youtube channel that does 3D time-lapse and poetry is read. Your poem Shattered Trust would be perfect for our next video that has Among Us 3D printed crewmate and ghost.

We would like to use your poem as the time lapse is going. We would give you full credit in the video and description. Would you permit that?

Thanks
Prints Rhino

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- Just Patty on January 18, 2021 at 12:22 pm said:
  
  Hello,
  That’s something new, I have never heard of this! This sounds interesting.
  You have my permission to use the poem, as long as you give me credit and send me the link when it’s published on the internet.
  Lots of love,
  Patty
  
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Eimaqwertyuiop on August 26, 2018 at 4:50 pm said:

I want to make yr poem to hardcore song…. its very niceeeeeeee, can i?

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- Just Patty on August 27, 2018 at 9:35 pm said:
  
  As long as you give me credit and send me the link to the song when it’s done, you have permission! 🙂
  
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Daniel Budiarto on June 18, 2013 at 11:40 pm said:

Ik wou “donker” zeggen maar om de een of andere reden klinkt het niet zo “diep” als het Engelse woord “dark.” If you know what I mean. This is good, I could feel the torrent of emotions from this poem. 🙂

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 11:54 pm said:
  
  Dankjewel Daniel! En je hebt gelijk, Dark of Darkness lijkt op de één of andere manier een betere beschrijving dan Donker. I know what you mean!
  Lots of love to you
  
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emma1951.wordpress.com on June 18, 2013 at 4:49 am said:

Patty – this IS gripping. I guess I was just overcome in the moment because I had to leave two friends behind recently – one of them my oldest sister, lost to envy. 🙂 Emma

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 12:34 pm said:
  
  I understand Emma. This is about my best friend I had for 17 years. The one person I thought would never leave my side. But he did when I needed him the most. It’s devastating, especially when it comes to family. Hugz to you♥
  
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frontrangescribbles on June 18, 2013 at 3:58 am said:

Don’t give up on friendships. There are some good people out in this vast world they just seem hard to find

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 12:37 pm said:
  
  I will never my friend. I am way to stubborn to ever give up. But I will be guarded for a while though. Hugz♥
  
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WB on June 18, 2013 at 3:31 am said:

Very good.

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 12:39 pm said:
  
  Thank you WB! 🙂
  
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invisibleme on June 18, 2013 at 3:14 am said:

This was hard for me to read. I’m in the process of going through this very thing with a man I thought was going to be my forever. Trust is so very fragile. I am sorry that you are feeling pain over a betrayal like this! I like how you write it to get it out of your heart!

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 12:40 pm said:
  
  I understand. Thank you so much. I just have to write, I can’t help it. Lots of Love to you♥
  
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  - invisibleme on June 18, 2013 at 4:26 pm said:
    
    I am the same way. If I don’t write I feel like I am trapped inside my heart and mind!
behindthemaskofabuse on June 18, 2013 at 12:29 am said:

Sorry this has happened. 😦

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- petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 12:30 am said:
  
  Thank you my friend. ♥
  
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Bee on June 17, 2013 at 10:25 pm said:

Trust sometimes is truely hard to find. True and beautiful words

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 10:35 pm said:
  
  Thank you Bee! ♥
  And it is
  
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emma1951.wordpress.com on June 17, 2013 at 10:17 pm said:

this hurts too much… 🙂

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 10:35 pm said:
  
  Yes, it does sometimes Emma. ♥
  Love to you
  
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  - emma1951.wordpress.com on June 18, 2013 at 2:10 am said:
    
    Yeah.. I know… but it’s just too true 🙂
  - petitemagique on June 18, 2013 at 2:24 am said:
    
    It is and it can break you into pieces, I know. But I won’t give up, there must be some sweet and loyal people left! I met a few on here! 🙂
sheridegrom - From the literary and legislative trenches. on June 17, 2013 at 10:03 pm said:

Dark but beautiful.

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 10:15 pm said:
  
  Thank you Sheri. It can’t always be rainbows and sunshine. ♥
  
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Charles Yallowitz on June 17, 2013 at 9:36 pm said:

Very sad. It’s hard to find loyal friends for some reason.

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 9:42 pm said:
  
  Yes. It’s strange that everyone seems to be looking for loyalty, but no one seem to find it.
  
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WyndyDee on June 17, 2013 at 9:33 pm said:

so sad, but so true Patty…

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 9:41 pm said:
  
  Thank you my friend. Yes, it’s sad but I am still convinced that there are in fact good people on this planet. ♥
  
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  - WyndyDee on June 17, 2013 at 11:11 pm said:
    
    Yes, I’ve met several recently! Including you…
  - petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 11:21 pm said:
    
    That’s so sweet of you! Thank you! Yes, WordPress has some very special and good people around for sure my friend. ♥
D Brockmeyer ~ Edmonton, Alberta, CANADA on June 17, 2013 at 9:33 pm said:

The dark ones are my favorite 🙂 Thanks for sharing!

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- petitemagique on June 17, 2013 at 9:40 pm said:
  
  Thank you! I have a soft spot for the dark ones as well.
  
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