*Warning* Dark Poetry!
About betrayal, broken promises, unreal friends. In the past, the present and the future…
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Hello,
I have a Youtube channel that does 3D time-lapse and poetry is read. Your poem Shattered Trust would be perfect for our next video that has Among Us 3D printed crewmate and ghost.
We would like to use your poem as the time lapse is going. We would give you full credit in the video and description. Would you permit that?
Thanks
Prints Rhino
Hello,
That’s something new, I have never heard of this! This sounds interesting.
You have my permission to use the poem, as long as you give me credit and send me the link when it’s published on the internet.
Lots of love,
Patty
I want to make yr poem to hardcore song…. its very niceeeeeeee, can i?
As long as you give me credit and send me the link to the song when it’s done, you have permission! 🙂
Ik wou “donker” zeggen maar om de een of andere reden klinkt het niet zo “diep” als het Engelse woord “dark.” If you know what I mean. This is good, I could feel the torrent of emotions from this poem. 🙂
Dankjewel Daniel! En je hebt gelijk, Dark of Darkness lijkt op de één of andere manier een betere beschrijving dan Donker. I know what you mean!
Lots of love to you
Patty – this IS gripping. I guess I was just overcome in the moment because I had to leave two friends behind recently – one of them my oldest sister, lost to envy. 🙂 Emma
I understand Emma. This is about my best friend I had for 17 years. The one person I thought would never leave my side. But he did when I needed him the most. It’s devastating, especially when it comes to family. Hugz to you♥
Don’t give up on friendships. There are some good people out in this vast world they just seem hard to find
I will never my friend. I am way to stubborn to ever give up. But I will be guarded for a while though. Hugz♥
Very good.
Thank you WB! 🙂
This was hard for me to read. I’m in the process of going through this very thing with a man I thought was going to be my forever. Trust is so very fragile. I am sorry that you are feeling pain over a betrayal like this! I like how you write it to get it out of your heart!
I understand. Thank you so much. I just have to write, I can’t help it. Lots of Love to you♥
I am the same way. If I don’t write I feel like I am trapped inside my heart and mind!
Sorry this has happened. 😦
Thank you my friend. ♥
Trust sometimes is truely hard to find. True and beautiful words
Thank you Bee! ♥
And it is
this hurts too much… 🙂
Yes, it does sometimes Emma. ♥
Love to you
Yeah.. I know… but it’s just too true 🙂
It is and it can break you into pieces, I know. But I won’t give up, there must be some sweet and loyal people left! I met a few on here! 🙂
Dark but beautiful.
Thank you Sheri. It can’t always be rainbows and sunshine. ♥
Very sad. It’s hard to find loyal friends for some reason.
Yes. It’s strange that everyone seems to be looking for loyalty, but no one seem to find it.
so sad, but so true Patty…
Thank you my friend. Yes, it’s sad but I am still convinced that there are in fact good people on this planet. ♥
Yes, I’ve met several recently! Including you…
That’s so sweet of you! Thank you! Yes, WordPress has some very special and good people around for sure my friend. ♥
The dark ones are my favorite 🙂 Thanks for sharing!
Thank you! I have a soft spot for the dark ones as well.